We had our 2nd screening of our film 'Prodigy' and we gained some feedback from our class peers on how they think we improved from the previous screening and how we can develop it further.
Please feel free to make comments on our short film the following questions are just guide lines.
Please feel free to make comments on our short film the following questions are just guide lines.
What would you change?
Who do you think our target audience is?
Where do you think you would watch this film? (arthouse etc)
Can you follow the narrative?
What do you think of the actor's performances?
What do you think of the actor's performances?
Thank you very much
What would you change?
ReplyDeleteI would probably make sure some of the actors speak a bit louder as the film was a bit quiet in some places.
Who do you think our target audience is?
People aged 15-25
Where do you think you would watch this film? (arthouse etc)
In arthouse cinemas and film festivals.
Can you follow the narrative?
I can follow it very easily and the flashbacks enabled me to find out more about the two main characters.
What do you think of the actor's performances?
I thought they were very convincing although they were slightly quiet in some scenes. Also with the flashback, the two actors were great and it was believable that they were the same people.
1. i would try and make the sound a bit more clearer, and also the lighting was a bit dark.
ReplyDelete2. 17-26
3.on the internet, at a film festival
4. yes mostly, but was a bit confused at the beginning, but i thought the flash backs worked really well
5. i though the actors were good and believable, which made the whole film a lot more enjoyable.
1. I would improve the sound and perhaps make the narrative clearer through dialogue and cinematography.
ReplyDelete2.15-25
3. Short film festivals,Youtube.
4.Ii thought using color for the flashbacks was really good, however i did the narrative a bit difficult to follow.
5.Ii thought the performances were really good and convincing.